Feedback On Feedback

Teacher Feedback
What do you like about my project at this stage?

• Clear and consistent style - black/white/grey effect
• Images on contents page
• Quote design on DPS

What could be improved?

• Manufactured/blasphemy on FC - is it clear to the reader what this is about?
• Blurry FC image of H.Williams
• Wording on bar code too big
• Cutting out of H.Williams/blurry image on contents
• Lighting on photographs of albums

Student Feedback
Front Cover Positives:

• Image is good and style of mag name
• Nice choice for title
• Good photos
• Layout is really good

Front Cover Improvements:

• Images at the bottom aren't clear
• Don't like the blue possibly use red?
• Change of background might work better
• Text might look better embossed
• Hayley Williams on front page looks a bit out of place

Contents Page Positives:

• Consistent colours
• Images are good
• Image - lovely - original
• Very clear house style
• Love how you listed the contents
• Variety of texts fits in genre well

Contents Page Improvements:

• Page numbers are bitty
• Blurry main photograph
• Could use the colour red on the contents page? as its been used on front cover and DPS
• Images of albums look cut off

Double Page Spread Positives:

• Generally really good
• Love the image and fonts
• Well layed out DPS
• Background works well and it fits the house style

Double Page Spread Improvements:

• Hard to see text against red
• I don't like the red and yellow paint covers the writing and makes it hard to read
• Writing could be in three columns
• Make the text more clear larger?
• Theres a lot of empty space
• Make the "Paramore Will" a bit bigger

On my double page spread the red and yellow was not meant to be there. The file didn't work when i tried to open it so when we finally got it working it was in a non editable format and for some reason had added the colours. On the real version this wont be on there.