Diary Entry Week 4
Music Magazine
I have finished the first draft of my magazine and have gained feedback on it. I will be uploading this to my blog. I looked over the feedback and have started writing notes on how things could be improved. I have decided to retake my picture as it has been said on my feedback that my front cover picture and my contents page picture are noticeably blurry. I feel I may change my ideas for pictures as it has been said that she should show a lot more attitude in the pictures as she gives on that persona in real life. I will incorporate this into my new pictures. I have also noticed that I have made careless errors on my draft as I have made several spelling and punctuation mistakes which I will change.
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